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Commentary: Toughen up
Freedland (24 February 2009)
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Commentary: Toughen up
Reply to Dr Summerfield |
13 March 2009 |
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Jonathan Freedland, columnist Guardian, London N1 9GU
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Derek Summerfield suggests that, by relying on data from the Israeli
human rights organisation B�Tselem, I am "at risk of uncritically
recycling figures that promote self serving IDF mantras." After all,
he asserts, "B�Tselem must depend in part on what the IDF tells them."
This is a serious charge to level at an organisation that has won
international praise for its fearless monitoring of the Israeli
occupation. Fortunately, it is false. I showed Summerfield�s letter to
B�Tselem�s communications director, Sarit Michaeli. Here�s an extract from
her reply; the full version is published on bmj.com[1]:
�B�Tselem�s modus operandi in cases of Palestinians killed by the
Israeli security forces is to send a field worker to the scene of the
killing, or if that isn�t possible, to the hospital or family home. The
purpose of the field research is to get as much information as possible
about the event, in the form of eyewitness testimonies, videos, pictures,
maps, medical and other documentation, etc ...
�Although B�Tselem tries to get a hold of all relevant information,
it does not accept at face value statements by either Palestinian or
Israeli sources. Therefore, it goes without saying that B�Tselem does not
depend on information from the Israeli army�quite the opposite: B�Tselem
often refuses to accept the military�s version of events, and this refusal
has enabled it to expose many cases in which Israeli soldiers and Border
Police officers unlawfully killed and injured Palestinians.�
On that basis, B�Tselem�which, to reiterate, is involved in
extensive, on-the-ground, forensic work on this topic�says that
�approximately half� of those Palestinians killed were combatants. Derek
Summerfield, an academic based in Britain, insists that such combatants
make up only "a small minority." B�Tselem puts the Palestinian civilian
death toll for the period under discussion at 1508. Summerfield insists it
exceeds 3000. I know whose figures I would prefer to rely on.
1 Michaeli S. Response from B�Tselem. Rapid response to Freedland J.
Commentary: Toughen up.
http://www.bmj.com/cgi/eletters/338/feb24_2/b524#210531
Competing interests:
JF is a director and trustee of Index on Censorship, which campaigns for freedom of expression. His mother was born in Palestine in 1936. |
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Commentary: Toughen up
Response from B'Tselem |
13 March 2009 |
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Sarit Michaeli, B�Tselem Communications Director http://www.btselem.org/
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B�Tselem�s modus operandi in cases of Palestinians killed by the
Israeli security forces is to send a field worker to the scene of the
killing, or if that isn�t possible, to the hospital or family home. The
purpose of the field research is to get as much information as possible
about the event, in the form of eyewitness testimonies, videos, pictures,
maps, medical and other documentation, etc. We also try to get some basic
information about the person killed (such as their full name, exact age,
especially if a minor, place of residence, etc.). This is used for two
primary purposes: one is B�Tselem�s casualty database, listing all victims
of the conflict in the OPT (Israeli, Palestinian and International).
Secondly, this information is used by B�Tselem as the basis for extensive
correspondence the organization engages in with the relevant investigative
bodies (primarily the Military Advocate General�s office, the
Investigative Military Police and the Ministry of Justice�s Department for
Police Investigations) in our ongoing work to ensure accountability where
there is suspicion that the killing has been in violation of the law.
B�Tselem office staff then cross-referenced the results of the field
research with other sources, including official Israeli and Palestinian
statements, media reports, Palestinian militant group statements, and so
on. When B�Tselem is satisfied that it has determined whether a person was
killed while participating in the hostilities or not, we will enter the
name in our database, along with the relevant classification. If we are
not sure as to the facts, or are unable to determine the legal position,
we will classify them under the �not known� rubric. All data is available
here:
http://www.btselem.org/English/Statistics/Casualties.asp
Although B�Tselem tries to get a hold of all relevant information, it does
not accept at face value statements by either Palestinian or Israeli
sources. Therefore, it goes without saying that B�Tselem does not depend
on information from the Israeli army � quite the opposite: B�Tselem often
refuses to accept the military�s version of events, and this refusal has
enabled it to expose many cases in which Israeli soldiers and Border
Police officers unlawfully killed and injured Palestinians.
Regarding what is considered by B�Tselem to be participation in the
hostilities: Broadly speaking, Palestinians employing potentially lethal
force (guns, rockets, explosives, Molotov cocktails) are listed as having
participated in hostilities at the time they were killed. The fact that a
person carried a weapon but did not actually take it out and use it does
not make that person a combatant. Likewise with regard to stone-throwing;
in most situations, stone-throwing does not constitute lethal force. In
those cases, where stone-throwing does indeed endanger lives (a person
killed while dropping cinder blocks from a roof, for example) this is
classified as participation in hostilities.
As to the recent hostilities in and around the Gaza Strip, especially
regarding the Palestinian police cadets who were killed in Gaza on the
first day of Israel�s aerial bombardment: B�Tselem has written to the
Israeli Attorney General to express its grave concerns about this and
similar operations, and to demand that the decision to target the police
cadets is investigated. It is clear from the following letter that
B�Tselem has not accepted unconditionally Israel�s justification for the
bombing:
http://www.btselem.org/English/Gaza_Strip/20081231_Gaza_Letter_to_Mazuz.asp
As to the issue of how many Palestinians took a direct part in
hostilities, B�Tselem�s figures, broadly speaking, indicate that
approximately half of the casualties of the conflict, since Sept 2000, and
until the Gaza assault, were non participants. We have not yet finished
the task of categorizing the enormous number of people killed in the Gaza
offensive.
It must be emphasized, though, that when B�Tselem lists a Palestinian
casualty in its database as having not participated in the hostilities
when killed, this does not indicate that those responsible for the killing
necessarily violated the law, or that any other legal or moral conclusion
can be drawn from the facts. It does mean, however, that Israel is
obligated to hold an effective, impartial and prompt investigation to
determine whether members of its security forces acted unlawfully, and to
hold accountable those responsible for violations.
Competing interests:
B'Tselem is the Israeli Information Center for Human Rights in the Occupied Territories |
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Commentary: Toughen up
A tip for a tip |
12 March 2009 |
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Michael O'Donnell, Jorneyman writer Loxhill GU8 4BD
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It was so kind of Jonathan Freedland to offer me tips on how to write
I hope
he won�t think it impertinent if I offer him one in return. When reviewing
an
article, it�s a good idea to look at, or even read, the reference the
writer puts
at the end of a sentence.
My article [1] began: �Critics of the BMJ, and of other medical
journals,
sometimes complain that editorial decisions are influenced by sinister
outsiders. The usual suspects are advertisers, political agencies, and
academic oligarchies. Less often named as villains are lobbyists who try
to
suppress or distort data that might damage their cause and who seek to
�silence� editors who publish those data.�
I used the phrase �sinister outsiders� to echo the vernacular of the
conspiracy
theorists who bombard editors. (Not for the first time I wish there were a
typeface, equivalent to italic, called ironic.) Freedland writes that in
using the
phrase, �He clearly has pro-Israel lobbyists in mind�. So clearly,
Jonathan,
that at the end of the paragraph I add a reference [2] which even a quick
glance would reveal makes no mention of Israel.
It describes an incident in which Californian �health activists�,
backed by
lobbyists with an alleged financial interest, mounted a campaign to
pressurise the Chancellor of the University of California Davis and the
Dean of
its Medical School to fire the editor and deputy editor of the Western
Medical
Journal. Their crime? Publicising data that contradicted the lobbyists�
claims.
In short I was making the point Freedland himself makes that malevolent
attacks on editors are not confined to pro-Israel lobbyists.
I don�t know Freedland so I can�t judge whether he was being
mischievous or
disingenuous. I�m happy to assume he was just careless and I write now
only
because I�m weary of responding to correspondents who use his article as
their authority for attributing to me opinions I do not hold and attitudes
that
are not mine.
1. O�Donnell M. Commentary: Standing up for free speech. BMJ 2009;
338:
a2094
2. Wilkes M, Yamey G. PSA storm. BMJ 2002;324:431
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As stated in my original article |
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Commentary: Toughen up
Re: Lobbying for a dream |
12 March 2009 |
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William Bilek, recently retired montreal
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Mr. Rouse's comments are inaccurate in several respects. Firstly, not
all writers of letters and responses are part of a "lobby". I certainly
write on my own behalf; (unless sharing a belief with hundreds of
thousands of others, and expressing it, makes one a member of a "lobby".)
Secondly, the state of Israel is not a "DREAM". It was a reality for a
thousand years; the reality was forcibly suspended, but, over 2000 years
was, and continues to be, supported by a PRAYER. Israel is a reality, once
again, and is embodied in its national anthem as a HOPE (HATIKVAH). It is
as Theodore Herzl said, "If you will it, it is no dream." Finally, why
does it seem to so disturb Mr. Rouse that Israel claims Jerusalem, once
again, as its re-newed capital? In its entire history, Jerusalem has never
been the capital of anything other than a Jewish state? Does its re-newed
stature as such affect the lives or well-being of Mr. Rouse, his patients,
or affect his care of those patients?
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